Reviews for wasteofspace kind of heart
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
i'm in the mood for poetry like this right now.

angst. passion. drama. thank you, and well done..
yspgirl chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
i didn't sign in because it wouldn't let me submit two reviews.

but i just wanted to say that this might be my favorite poem ever. because sometimes i'll reach a point in my life and it comes back to me clear as anything. like i was just walking and i heard it in my head

"she can't take the pressure of

someone screaming "this is the real

fucking world, little girl!"

she knows

she knows"

that is my favorite. and i can't tell you how true it rings and how much i adore your words. because right now, that's all i have in my head.

so i figured maybe i'd tell you again.
Mairi Cross chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
*sigh* I know this...
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
wow i'm really in love with this. i love "pretty like broken hearts/and thunderstorms" and "so she's... that she loves you not" i think this is going on my favorite stories list because it rings incredibly true and is beautifully written. -aly
Darkest Angels chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
This is soo amazing! I love how you write and include the side thoughts and the different point of views and almost lines:"((the kind that would gouge her eyes outso she wouldn't have to see the truth.))"Definatly a favorite... and its the first thing I've read by you.-Darkest Angels
eldrin chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Love the line about the "taped together masterpieces" and the beautiful diction all around. Very emotional and painful.
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
You must be some kind I'm in love with this piece.

Great write. going on my faves.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
ohpretty. pretty hurting things.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/31/2006

Just so raw and powerful and unrequited.

Jesus, you write angst with such poignancy. Lovely.

~* Noelle
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Wow, I love your unique writing style and formatting. This poem was quite intriguing! Very nicely written, keep writing! ~Sara