Reviews for Penitence
Hele chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
How does this "expose" anything? It's just a series of assertions.I like the variety in the language that you used, however.
Feathered Feri chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I *love* this. It's both powerful, and daring. I'm happy that you had the guts to put this up, i am still getting there.