|Reviews for the game|
| Federname chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Oh, great, I just lost The Game. XP
Back to the poem...
Well, some spelling problems and I'd like to see more capitalization/punctuation work. The other reviewers say it's a little cliche and I have to agree, but I like the basic structure to this poem and if you expand on it it could be really amazing.
| Laura chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
This one is different, Sometimes i think about that, if its just a game, only maybe when we succeed its game over and we get the rewards or is it that if we fail its game over? lol...confusing right? I like this one though!
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
This isn’t a bad poem, but the ideas being expressed here - such as life is a game, we all play roles, and game over at death – are not original ideas. As such, this poem is rather cliché and a bit boring. If you want to use the old “life is a game” notion, put your own original spin on it.