|Reviews for The Defender Mages: War Breaks|
| ohboi chapter 5 . 2/6/2007
This is a pretty cool story. It's easy to read and funny. Keep up the good work and I'll definately be back to finish reading it.
| Alteng chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
Well, the last bit makes a lot of sense. And I understand Yemeana's feelings about telling her friend all the secrets. It seems like she will need a lot of training, and she certainly received a tongue lashing from her sister.
| Alteng chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Well, it is a nice story line, and you have a pleasant description of your main character. It is interesting how Selena dissolves into the dust of the ground.
The bit with the water was very fairy talesque. It works.
| MarkPenn chapter 6 . 8/16/2006
this was good for some of your first battles. I really like the ideas for your creatures. Keep on writing.
| MarkPenn chapter 5 . 8/14/2006
Another great story I can not wait until Yemeana comes in contact with the unicorn.
| MarkPenn chapter 4 . 8/13/2006
You have done it again, this is great and there is no other way to put it. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
| MarkPenn chapter 3 . 8/4/2006
Lol it was pretty funny in the begining and I see you put alot of effort into this chapter. Very good.
| MarkPenn chapter 2 . 8/2/2006
Hi Mark again. This chapter was better than the first but you could use a little sentence varriation. I can not wait until you write another chapter.
| Adamn chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
You said you just started? NO WAY! This has great potential so you should continue the story...
| MarkPenn chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
This was incredible for your beginig for writing. I only started to write a few months ago as well. But, no offence, you should have made some kind of awesome cermony to get the powers. 5 out of 5 seriously.