Alice is sdying
Extra S there
That was creepy.
I love it!

I wonder why you put Alice is dying. Is it because she is living a life that isn't fit?

Otherwise, I really liked reading this. And I can pretty much relate to how Alice feels.

Love this. Creative and wonderful. Alice is dying; nice.

Alice is dying. Clever.

I think the simple rhyme and meter added to the impact of this poem. I particularly liked the line, "Her heart has rotted in her chest," and though I'm not usually one for gimmicks like a hidden message, I thought in this case it was subtle and added to the value to the poem. Good work - I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your poetry.

This poem is very intense/beautiful/meaningful. I love the rhyme, the figurative language, and the imagery. It all adds to the reality of the poem. :)

This was tragic, in an almost exciting way. Odd, yes?

It was brilliant how you used the bolding of "Alice is dying."

That simple act really made this one of a kind, bravo.

Hmm. In the 4th line, you bolded two s's. I'm assuming that wasn't intentional.

"Broken glass, she’s left with nothing

but a broken dream, and some things

never change, her feet are bleeding-"

I think the repeating of broken was a little superfluous, you could've changed one of them into something else. Also, those lines seem a little off when compared to the rest of the piece. Those few things really destroy the flow.

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thats brilliant

amazing. I love what you did whith the bold text, though I think you have an extra "s" in line four.

This is a really awesome poem and i highly commend you on it. I also managed to see the Alice Is Dying part... thats pretty cool... Well Done!

Catch, Dani

alice is dying. Your cover is gone. Where to turn to when even yourself deserts you? A beautiful poem. My all time favorite. Must show to My Vampire.

Fucking Awesome. That's not much good as a review, but man, that's just fucking awesome.

toward the middle it loses the good rythem it had... u can change the word choice and it may make it easyer to read...

wow poor alice, and i hope im not the only one to notice the bolding letters spell out to your pen name?

adding to my c2 because this is wonderfully written and a unique poem!

i love rich i love the fact that there's a rhyme to this, because frankly, i suck at rhyming. haha.