|Reviews for Beach|
| lady moonlight chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Aw steph that is so cute. It was really flowy and so sweet. I hope he was there on the beach. Great job Steph.
Loves & Hugs~ Allie
| Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
| Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Not as good as most of your stuff, but its still good.
This one unfortunately, the chpiness doesen't work as well as the other ones, but its still good!
| Elenive chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Simple, but very elegant. The italic sentences seem to symbolize the train of thought of the voice in this poem. I love the part "I'll be waiting at the beach."
| Curiositie chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
A dear concept. I personally find the structure a bit of a distraction from your words. Love the last line to pieces.