Reviews for Beach
lady moonlight chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Aw steph that is so cute. It was really flowy and so sweet. I hope he was there on the beach. Great job Steph.

Loves & Hugs~ Allie
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
How cute!
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Not as good as most of your stuff, but its still good.

This one unfortunately, the chpiness doesen't work as well as the other ones, but its still good!

Keep Rocking!

Love, Tim.
Elenive chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Simple, but very elegant. The italic sentences seem to symbolize the train of thought of the voice in this poem. I love the part "I'll be waiting at the beach."

Curiositie chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
A dear concept. I personally find the structure a bit of a distraction from your words. Love the last line to pieces.