Reviews for City
and we'll dance chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
wow! really well written
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
How true.
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I actually want to read more...lol...Seems so incomplete, thats a good quality in a poem. Leaving people to think...

Keep Rocking!

Love, Tim
InspiredSpider chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I like the symbology and it makes you think- i suppose it's like that old saying, one mans garbage is another mans treasure anyway its good spider
Elenive chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Well written, descriptive. It didn't strike me to be as powerful as one of your other poems, Flowers on a Rainy Morning, but it was still pretty good.

Nice job, keep writing.

Elenive
Curiositie chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
It's been a long time since I've read a poem with this message. A complex concept well explained and decorated. Keep up the good work.