Reviews for Defeat the Darkness
Juan Lechuga chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
It was a very good poem. Nice rhymes and rhythm. Something I can relate to very well. Keep at it.
karmakaze chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
It's definitely a cute love poem, but the rhymes seem a bit forced to me. I'm not trying to insult because you're a good writer, just giving some advice;-)
Xanaphia chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Wow that is very deep. *likes about it a lot* It's to the point but really deep. I like it.