Reviews for violin sadness plays
randompoetry chapter 7 . 12/30/2006
The whole collection is strong, but it doesnt quite match the intensity of the first one. I loved a lot of them though, especially toni. That was another good one. They were all wonderful, dont be mistaken when I say the first one was really good they were all perfect, just the first one struck me the most.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
Wow. This was so beautiful and depressing and...just I love it.
simpleplan13 chapter 7 . 8/30/2006
I like this... the light and room thing is great
simpleplan13 chapter 6 . 8/30/2006
not your best in this collection.. i liked the first 2 lines but the last one wasnt that great
simpleplan13 chapter 5 . 8/30/2006
I like the sunshine after the rain concept... beautifully done.. I love the format
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
sad and beautiful... really love the beginning stanza
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 8/30/2006
powerful and beautifully written
FunkyFlower chapter 7 . 8/7/2006
hmm, this reminds me of when i'm ill and lying down on the couch and my carer (often my mum) leaves the room, turning the light off. and it brings back the sort of spooky emotions. wonderful work,

mez
FunkyFlower chapter 6 . 8/7/2006
sad but sort of beautiful in its own way. all sorta makes me think 'heart break'. lol. great job,

Mez
FunkyFlower chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
wow. this is wonderful. i really like the way u wrote this just using that expression. its sad and bittersweet. beautiful,

mez
FunkyFlower chapter 4 . 8/7/2006
this is the best so far. i really love the heart-deep emotions. its sad and really makes u empathise. brilliant job:D

mez
FunkyFlower chapter 3 . 8/7/2006
ineteresting to say the least. i liked the ending but the overall work does make u think. great job,

Mez
FunkyFlower chapter 2 . 8/7/2006
this is sad. i've never really encountered anorexia but its touching to be able to empathise with the girl. its like she's deceiving herself, almost attempting to convince herself that she can be pretty this way. quite sad. :( ah well, unique perspective,mez
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
woah. to be honest, i was pretty throwed by the last bit on heaven. found it a lil confusing but i liked the imagery and overall feel of it. seems almost magical :D

mez