Reviews for Subplots
Aomera chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This is lovely, creat use of repitition. I also love the itallics - I'm a fan of doing things like that in poetry, when appropriate. well done :)
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
It's the paradox that puzzles me

The sheer vulgarity of grace

Its simple perfection


As the haze inside my head



Victor Joseph chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
i like the lines "I love you, though you taunt me/I love you because you taunt me"
notthecreepyfatguy chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Once again this is amazing. I cant believe that this is many poems fused into one, you put them together so perfectly.
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
I love this.

"It's the paradox that puzzles me/The sheer vulgarity of grace/Its simple perfection"

"I know there's no magic here../Just spoken word,/a dull, monotonous sound that leaves me pining/For the enigmatic dreams of childhood/Where clouds were fairy kingdoms/Secrets and subplots,/Between the lines"

This is amazing.

shadowcat86 chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
Hm... good. I like it!

Very Angsty chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
I liked this poem, it gives me a strange, but good feeling at the same time.. weird huh? ha. i know, i'm pretty weird myself. great job! keep writing!