I left a review before and forgot to put my name, and I am greedy so now I critique again!

I like your poetry because it is optimistic and yet realistic, and this one portrays that fully. I'm not sure if I like breaking each stanza with the word "impossible" and "possible" but it be cool, yo.

Haha, love the second line. . 'To deliberately miscompute reason and rime.' But it is so true. Life is what you make of it, and you can make it possible. Very good! meg