Reviews for Insomnia
daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 4/9/2012

You set up and tore down my expectations perfectly in such few words. dividing "ten thousand" between two lines was pure genius!
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Cynical and concise. A sad take on modern society.
NeonNights chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Yay pill popping America. Flows very well, especially with the line breaks, and the contrast between the childish innocence of sheep the cold reality of medication doesn't hurt either. Well done.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
thats optimistic, really.

makes me laugh when it probably shouldnt
miss understanding chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
XD True. Counting sheep is boring. I always get bored before I fall asleep.

Sleeping pills: nature's magic, topped only in wonderfulness by midol and aspirin.

Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
never a truer word spoken in haiku!
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
Haha, very clever! :) Such a fine choice of words, indeed.
ygg chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
Haha that is so true :-) Well done!
Tia LaPorte chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Amen to that. Counting sheeps never works for me, but the pills do. Excellent job.
Oceanjewel chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
hehehe. dark and light at the same time. good stuff.
trash can art chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Pure well thought out genius, man. Superb, absolutely superb. Wit is something you've certainly conquered my friend, and not in the blatant snobbish sort of way; more like the calm, smooth, and calculating kind of way.

Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
*laughs* Indeed!
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
love it :)
eldrin chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
I like this one. Real, honest, but can make any sufferer laugh.
le roi des pirates chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
I completely agree, a perfect example of the nagging insomnia. Keep it real! _~