Reviews for seamed like my skin
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Ooh, a bit of a grotesque poem with the imagery, but nice all the same. You use words so effectively. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
bedroom button eyes makes me giggle like a moron.
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Stark and gleaming. This poem is not particularly for the faint hearted... the subject's discomfort, cynicism and anguish can be clearly felt be the reader.
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
This is sad, but very beautifully written. I love how it seems to hold an entire history of scars this person (or you?) is holding 'seamed' inside. I like it a lot, one can perfectly see what the person is feeling. Very sad :-(. By the way, thanks a lot for your review on The Tempest, I really really appreciate your criticism; it is very strained, I've forgotten how to write poetry, so every effort is inevitably gross and lacks flow and well...poetry :-P. Love, Mia