Reviews for Mad House
TAMMY MICHELLE chapter 25 . 5/26/2007
really enjoyed reading can't wait to read more
Poe M chapter 25 . 11/3/2006
Hm, I briefly read over the chapters I've missed and I do agree about getting too complicated, the primary reason, in my opinion, is the struggle of POVs and too many characters. This story has so much potential, such an awesome idea/theme... I think this one should be set aside for a bit, follow what's calling you now, then come back with a stronger eye and tougher pen and see if reconstruction is feasable. Like I said, the story in this has the power to be fantastic!

Happy Writing.

Titen-Sxull chapter 25 . 11/1/2006
Wait, what? DUH DUN DUH- James has feelings for Emily, weird, and Emily has forgotten Logan (and Pi)... I'm not sure what's going to happen, its a total cliff hanger, and the worst part is Emily and Michael are having serious issues and Jame's can't stop staring out windows and having inappropriate feelings for his sister-in-law... Well written as is a constant with you, and as always I'm left wondering what's going to happen next... I've also noted that the supernatural, mainly the ghosts, haven't had very big roles in recent chapters and I'm wondering how this is all gonna come together (the suspense is killing me)...
Titen-Sxull chapter 24 . 10/30/2006
Some very excellent descriptions here (as always), I'm still wondering why Michael thought everything looked bright when it was seven in the evening (unless he spent a lot of time unconscious, or is actually losing his mind)... As usual I have no idea what's going to happen next, and I keep wondering why Jame's is always comforting Emily, does he have some sort of a crush on his brother's wife or is he just an uber supportive guy (I'm guessing the latter)... I can't wait for the final conflict, when Michael must put his skills to the test and defeat X, this guys been through so much he deserves a happy ending... good stuff...
Titen-Sxull chapter 23 . 10/26/2006
Nice... this Mab has some interesting information about the nature of sleep, and the question rises, what affects will this revelation about people and their internal clones have on the course of the story (if any)... Some great descriptions (as usual) and of course, also as usual, I have no idea what's going to happen next... good stuff...
Darket chapter 22 . 10/2/2006
I guess it was a good chap. Took me a bit to read tho, sorry bout that.
Titen-Sxull chapter 22 . 9/28/2006
interesting... finally Emily gets a little enlightenment after being in the dark for so long, but what's to become of the sleeping Michael and his supportive brother James? And what of X, surely he still seeks to destroy Michael... Guess I'll have to wait to find out... good stuff...
Aidenne chapter 10 . 9/22/2006
*ponders* This is great- and congratulations on the Spotlight again! :D I enjoyed the detail and suspense- don't keep us waiting. :P
Poe M chapter 20 . 9/17/2006
Great dialogue between Emily and James! Well sure to edit your work before posting, to catch typos in , now we are left with what's going to happen next...Looking forward to reading!Happy Writing,~Poe
Poe M chapter 19 . 9/17/2006
fixing the review from 18 that didn't post right...The part I quoted was brilliant! Absolutely lovely and your best writing so far!Consider changing "monontonous" to another, more appealing word. Monontonous means bland and ho hum and the waterfall comes off as peaceful and beautiful.I love the blue underwear bit.. haha gave me a this posts in full :)~Poe
Poe M chapter 18 . 9/17/2006
"His lids drooped as he tried yet again. This time, he could hear something else. He heard the wind, a gentle chime that tingled his skin with solitude. The waterfall quieted down into a soft continuous hush of whispers. All that was around him meshed into one beauty that he had never beheld before. Something tugged within his heart at that moment. He could feel its core grow and harden threefold. A newfound hope billowed, and filled his once hollow chest. The chains that confined his mind was now broken"
Titen-Sxull chapter 20 . 9/16/2006
I hate alarm clocks... I loved the description of passing through the dimension and also liked Michael's idea on the darkness in his head... also, this piece of alliteration with the letter S caught my attention "surrounding of soothing dark. It seemed to be seconds"... I love alliteration... good stuff...
Darket chapter 19 . 9/16/2006
Nice. Sorry I didn't read faster, but meh wuz too busy. And I felt really bored... So yeah... But I read. I'll see you around!


Titen-Sxull chapter 19 . 9/15/2006
Ah, the training continues... Michael begins to learn the powers necessary to stay one step ahead of his enemies and eventually defeat them... glad to see Emily portrayed in a loving light, my opinion of her wasn't that strong after she didn't believe Mike and wanted seperation and all that, but I saw a glimpse of love for once... some humor in the issue of Logan's undergarments... and this piece of sage advice... "Your core is the key to all. Examine it, understand it, rule it. Don’t let it rule you" ... Good stuff...
Poe M chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
I think this is one of your best chapters, if not the best. You answered my question from chapter 16.. explaining the contradiction. Very good! I wasn't expecting that. The dialogue is very smooth and strong in this chapter. All in all, I have to say this is one shows your strengths as a , 17 chapters! I am so proud of you! It's no easy feat to keep a story going. You should be proud, smiles for you :)~Poe
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