Reviews for Falling Apart
frannyfry chapter 18 . 1/31
That was great! Loved it!
StarEyed14 chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
I'm so CONFUSED! How come you only have 3 reviews? Your story so far is great and I've only read one chapter. I shocked that there are so few reviews... did you post all the chapters down at once or what? Anyway... I just wanted to say that you've got a good writing style and technique that makes me want to keep reading and reading. Everything flows together perfectly.

Good Job,

stareyed14
j.c-chic chapter 18 . 4/4/2007
DUDE U ROCK! I CRIED LIKE EVERY CHAPTER.. i cant believe u bloody let wayne go.
only.ashes chapter 12 . 8/4/2006
. ?storyid23974 read my story pleasee
Forlorn Warrior chapter 8 . 8/4/2006
ok, I love you...jk. but seriously, you play halo, you watch red vs blue, and im guessing you read control alt delete occasionally. I love your story, its only too bad i cant find a girl like you...WAH *cries* oh well. anyways, keep up the good story work. later