Reviews for Am I Here
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Lots of well-portrayed emotion in this. From the summary, you executed your goal quite well. You can really sense the uncertainty and confusion, and I adore the repetition in each sequence: the body party, mention of a day, the question at the end... it adds rhythm to it, I like it a lot. And the description of the body really adds to the emotion, you can imagine someone trembling, their eyes darting around, afraid. Very good, keep up the great work!