Reviews for With Only A Dagger
Fan Tasy98 chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
very good and intriguing to me. Had me wanting to read more. I like all the action in the very beginning. you had very good details at the very start
flight06 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
You have an interesting short, here. Chastel seems like she has a dirty past, but that makes her all the more interesting. I'm not so sure about Drake.

Drake doesn't seem very well written, to be honest. He fits all of the roles, but he seems like a bunch of generalizations, and no outbreaks of any sort.

You write well, with the occasional grammar error.

My greatest disappointment with the story was how you didn't let the reader guess anything or feel anything for themselves-you told them to feel things by your diction.

My greatest joy was the story-it grabbed me. I feel like that says a lot. I hope you plan on writing more about this character.
Torn and Tattered chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
Aw... a little sudden... but that's okay. Drake seemed so cute (i'm laughing) her reaction was to sudden to the news of the dude's death, it should have been a stunned reaction first. was it really that much of a dramatic response on that ship?

-Phoenix