|Reviews for just so freaking funny|
| Flies chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I think what I like about this poem is the fact you lay out a domino affect, then explain how it cannot be picked up "in that order", and then give it sort of a personal twist. It's a basic, but powerful, way of writing, and your choice of topic is personal, honest and gut-twisting. Marvelous work.
| ash the arsnist chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
this was well-worded && i love how it made me feel almost helpless, good write