Reviews for These Dreams
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Wow this was really well written. Every line flowed together, and the imagery was potrayed excellently. I could really feel the desire, passion, and angst vibrating through your words. Nice job!
the-foresight chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Good vocabulary use, I've never used the word tantalising ever. It has a real elegance about it that is hard to achieve.
La Princesse Lontaine chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Very beautiful and writing seems to have a dreamlike quality to it. It is also well-crafted. The stanza with the image of the flowing river is effectively illustrated and reinforced with the enjambments. I love it. This'll be a fav of mine. :-)