Reviews for Beautiful Wasteland
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Such openness and despair. The scene that you've created can be specific to an individuals situation, or more open to society in general. Wonderful write.
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Evocatively mournful. This extends a sensitive feel to it that is sad and hopeless.
silentscreamer07 chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Wow, I really liked this. It may be short, but there seemed like a lot of meaning behind it. Just in those 16 words. The title reminds me of a song I listen to a lot..so this may be way I like it so much. Plus it seems like an oxymoron..."Beautiful Wasteland" Great job though! And thank you so much for your review! And yes, I agree with you...there was a lot lacking in that poem. Thanks again! and *keep writing*

~Britney
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
I like this, but the tense of "has turned" is past perfect and "walked" is just past- they don't agree. "barren and gray" is wonderfully descriptive! ~bella~