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Caution
meaninglessTears
chapter 1 .
8/26/2006
aw it's so deep. good poem, i really do wuv it. keep writing.
godwallop
chapter 1 .
8/7/2006
it doesn't rhyme, therefore it's not poetry
Crossing the Rubicon
chapter 1 .
8/6/2006
I love how you used the train & levee examples and then moved on to love. Good.