Reviews for Commitment
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
you know when you stumble on something that coincidentally completely and eerily synchs up with your current state of mind? i LOVE it. such echoes in the escapism - because, you know, you always think travelling will help you get away, away from what, it doesn't matter, there's just that vague promise of reinvention and anonymity. for some reason. beautiful. Congan jungles...
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Oh? What's wrong with Carolina? It's because we've practically been having a heatwave. Hopefully, it'll rain soon.

I love the "Just another phase" line.

Very interesting poem, you really made a character.