Reviews for Divinity
PM20 chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Okay I had to read this a few times, but I conclude that I do like this poem. At first I thought it jumped around too much and that the words in () kind of took away from the flow of the poem. I still think they do but some of them help to clarify what you are talking about. It may be beneficial to put those words at the bottom so if people are wondering what they meal they can look, but if not I don't think it would really take a lot away from the poem. Other than that good work and thanks for sharing.