Reviews for Holding My Breath
Outsider Looking In chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
I just wanted to tell you that i thought you did a great job on this peice, and I can't tell you how many things I related to in it.
Lord Whiteroses chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Back in the days when I was on a different site (for poetry) I would have given this my 'absolute favorite' award. This is one of the BEST works that I have ever seen. So filled with truth and something that everyone can relate to. Other than a few grammatacal mistakes, this is PERFECT
FallingVariety chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Amazing peice of work. And I know exactly how you feel.. Ive felt it too (most of it)
forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
it's an amazing stream of consciousness. i can relate to what she's feeling.

my favorites line is the one about people not wanting passion anymore, they just want angst. how true. idiots.

i totally understand her thoughts in the last four paragraphs. those are all things i've thought of so many times.

i love this. i love the way it's written and the things she thinks about. this world is a fucked up place and sometimes you have to be nearly out of your mind to really see it clearly, just like this girl.

this is a beautiful piece of work. i think it's the best i've read lately.