Reviews for The Guardian Angel |
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![]() ![]() I can't believe you took it down, noooooo! And I've always had a story idea like this Guy gets Guardian angel, secretly falls in love with her... Can't believe I can't read it! I would definitly buy this if it was published. |
![]() ![]() -Squeal- Eric is just so cute! I thought he was drunk or something when he was messing with Aurora's wings. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to read "The Guardian Angel" for 2 reasons. #1. It's an interesting story! #2. I'm writing a story with a guardian angel in it, and I could use some ideas. JD Fly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaw. Such a beautiful and sweet ending. As much as I love the ending (and the epilogue which I have to read yet), I don't want their story to end. Aurora is just too adorable and cute and everything I myself want to be. Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely adorable! The ending was too cute. I know it's been a while since this story was completed and you're probably wondering why I'm just now reading this. Well, I don't really know. I got bored, went profile surfing, found this lovely story and decided to read. :) well, the story is awesome. Seeya. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a really sweet story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing, toy should really write a squeal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I'm from Vancouver, too and I wanted to congratulate you on your story. It was really sweet - and although I wish I could know more what happened behind the scenes with Aurora meeting with the archangels, I guess it would've been hard to write. I feel bad for not reviewing more often on this story, but I swear I'll try to do better when I read your next one! This is such a loveable story, and I love how you made the characters come to life. And I really love the little songs you placed in the beginning of the chapters, too - they're really soothing and went along with the story, esp. the song by Jimmy Eat World. I notice there were little mistakes (your instead of you're) but you write so well. It was really easy to get into "The Guardian Angel." One question is, if Aurora became the wife of the future husband, wouldn't her family (the one she had before her death) notice the striking resemblance between her and their deceased daughter? Thank you for posting this story online, I really enjoyed it. And I hope you write more in the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like I like! Yeah, I'm glad you added an epilogue. It feels more complete. I'll put it in favourites ... it was a nice read :) and I think I'm going to look forward to your sequel ! I don't know why but I love arrogance- like endearing arrogance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() he felt a bit mood swingy here is the only down point in this chapter otherwise... the story idea.. .character development, its all going good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() no i love the fact taht he's insecure its giving him a believeable character :) i did like the story idea, which is why i decided to read it but then there first few chapters weren't as eloquent or as deep as i would've liked so i was a little disappointed but as i persevered, its growing on me :D I WILL finish this story! and i'm beginning to like it too ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just thought i'd tell you i just read this and thought it was amazing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this. It was really sweet. Well done. I am currently writing my own angel story and it is frightningly similar, however the girl is human rather than the boy. Please have a read and let me know what you think. love bb067 |