Reviews for To Kill the Cherubim
Otakuami chapter 11 . 12/18/2021
I really wish this story continued. I love all the characters except for the obvious one of course aka the cheerleader. I am interested in Cassidy fascination with Jake. At first I didnt like how he beat up guys to make them stay away from her but I absolutely adore how he isnt pushing it but at the same time pursing it subtly. The thought process, conversations and relationships are more than skin deep which is honestly one of the best things you have written in this story. I hope you really continue. Give this thing a chance now that I am guessing things have settled down at home and perhaps even in your heart
Out-Spoken-Runaway chapter 11 . 12/17/2014
I'm sorry to hear about your family member's passing. I hope you and your family are coping well. I really wish you would update your stories as I think they are all fantastic. Sending peace and love your way :)
SkyBlue1309 chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
I hope u do continue this story. Sorry about ur family member. But thisis really good n I love the humor! Hope u do continue soon
leavemeialone chapter 11 . 6/3/2013
AH . . . THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! It saddens me how you have not continued. It is understandable though! But the story is so good and I guess I have fallen in love with your characters. They are so amazing! I like seeing Jake and I how he is more than just a rich boy. He cares A LOT ABOUT HER! I like how Fred and Nick both know how much Jake likes her . . . and they even try to help him out . . . because they see how much he likes her. I think it is funny seeing him so nervous, it is so cute! I hope that guys actually get this nervous over girls. I like seeing how he feel and how much she is the one doing it. She doesn't even realize what effect she has over him. I do hope you update, so I can see a happy ending between these two. As for Victoria, I feel sorry for her. I think she does have problems with her life besides the bias view we have of her of just her superficial ways. When she mentioned how she didn't want to see her dad, it sounded like there was a good reasoning for that. I love all the other characters, they are so lovable especially Nick and Fred. XD Thanks for this wonderful story.
Bubbly Girl chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
Please try to pick back up this story and Bridging the Gap. :) I would really love to see these stories finished! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
P.S. I know this is silly but it made me really happy when you wrote that Cassidy's Aunt is named Luella Hutchinson because Hutchinson is my last name! :)
dramaqueen89 chapter 11 . 3/29/2012
Im really sorry to hear that :( I hope that you and your family are better now.

I just wanted to say that your story is truly amazing and I really hope that you will continue on. The development of the chracters have been fun and the slow interaction between Jake and Cassidy is truly tiltillating :)
dramaqueen89 chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
"Things weren't the same for Jake though. This was the closest he had ever been with Cassidy. Ever. In short, he couldn't concentrate. Sure he looked calm and collected but in truth he wanted to strangle Nick and Fred, the only ones who knew about his predicament, for making him sit here. Didn't they know how tormenting this was? Every time he as much as glanced at her, he'd hear one of them trying, trying their very best at containing a chuckle from erupting. It was pure agony.

When Cassidy still had on her sweater earlier, Jake noted that it appeared a bit old. He wanted to buy her a new one. Cashmere. That would look good on her no doubt. Something dark so that it would bring out her eyes but pale enough to show off her freckles. Yes, something along those lines. Jake sighed. He wanted to spoil her so bad."

"And yet, there was Parrish, in his room, taking a box from one of his cabinets and depositing the picture of a strawberry blond haired woman inside. Another addition to his ever growing pile."

dramaqueen89 chapter 3 . 3/29/2012

Jake is too adorable for words. But so caveman like with him threatening guys to back off of her. Reminds me of another story that I read here but I cant remember the title.

Anyway, on to the next :)
imwithyou chapter 11 . 11/12/2011
this is a great story!

but...I'm guessing that you're no longer updating this...? :'(
DNAstar chapter 3 . 4/8/2011
happy-drizzle chapter 10 . 11/25/2010
Its a really really cute story! I hope you continue soon:)

I loved the way the characters are not perfect in every way. Usually, cause Jake is one of the main characters, he would usually be extemely tall yada yada. He is hot, but you know, in his own way. I love Nick and Zed! and Tammy:)

and the overprotective Jake:) its so cute that he wants to take care of her and buy her Cashmere:)

SQUEAL! Awesome story!
blueskyangel chapter 11 . 10/1/2010
Please do continue! Love it!
wez chapter 11 . 5/19/2010
will you add more?
Calla Lily chapter 11 . 4/20/2010
I really do love this story and hope you'll finish it soon. The story is well written and the characters have a lot of depth to them. Reading this makes me feel like I'm back in high school again and those were really good times I like to remember.
sanne chapter 11 . 9/18/2009
you know what... this is the first story that i have read in fictionpress.. and i'm not kidding.. i started reading when i was in 4th year high school and now i'm in 2nd year college.. i've been waiting for you to update.. and now i really miss this story and want to tell you how i feel.. hope you'll update it.. i really really want you to continue it.. please? :( :(
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