Reviews for To Kill the Cherubim |
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![]() ![]() ![]() To quote one of my fave band's song, you got this story "Hands Down." Jake's made an impression on me already at first chap. Wonderful job you did with the McGowans (Cas, Zed and Nick). Already curious with Cas' bunch. And Jim, hmm, you quite gave the guy a character. Haven't been around commenting on stories much lately, but I figure that story's worth it. Great job! Looking forward to more chapters. *salutes* P.S. You misspelled "tray" as "trey" when she ordered vanilla sundae and apple pie at Mickey D's. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() after reading the first three chapters of your story,,.. i found it really interesting,,.. and i have fun reading it,,.. So,i hope you could update really soon,,.. |
![]() ![]() you've got to update! i like this story muchly! |
![]() ![]() Hi! Um...just reviewing to tell you that T.K.T.C. is looking really promising. I can't wait for the next update *wink, wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha. I love how everyone knows that Jake is crushing on Cassidy EXCEPT for Cassidy herself. XD Talk about irony. Anyhoo, great chapter! I can't wait to see what Cass does when she finds out what Jake really thinks about her! And what her evil cousin will do once she discovers that her chances to snag the guy are slim to NONE. XD Har har. In her face. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha. I loved this chapter especially the end, Jake is so hooked to Cassidy. It's funny because she has no clue, and wants to hook him up with Torrie. I can't wait to see what happens when Jake finally finds the courage to tell Cassidy how he feels. Imagine her suprise and... dread? Please update soon. I'm addicted to this story. lol Marija. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! *hops around* the third chapter! I'm still in love with your characters, i just can't read enough *sighes* Okay but i have a question(while it may be sort of stupid but hey) so does Jim actually like Cassidy? I think it's kind of mean that he(Jim) usead Cassidy to get under Jake's skin, the stupid...*continues to mutter* okay, so i'm done now. Thank-you very much for writing another chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, i think its so cute that jake is like that. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, why is cassidy so clueless? aw, poor jake and evil nick, _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. oh dear. did I hawr at you? I'm STILL horrified at that. Though I did laugh out loud at your recanter. I'm so bad at reviewing, but when I do, I do indeed usually fail to curb my spasticity. Sorry! Also; "He was so dead." I do not think truer words have ever been spoken. xD |
![]() ![]() still loving this story. cassidy's so dynamic, or did i say that already? anyways, keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! how can i put this? i love this story! There's just something enigmatic (spelling?) about the characters that leaves you begging for more. And thus i beg you for another chapter! i don't think i can survive with only two chapters! I enjoy your style of writing and i love how your characters are so developed, even in the beggining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliche? Maybe. But I LOVE cliche. So its all good here. XD Well, I like what you've started here. It's...interesting. Cassidy seems like a pretty cool main character, Jake is HOT, (which is a must, har har), there's a bitchy gal out to piss everyone off, a few best friends, cool siblings...yes, my friend. I do believe you have a wonderful beginning here. I hope you can continue it soon! |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Do you know when the next Harry Potter book is coming out? Hope you update soon. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() I LOve THIS! dont be to nervous cauz you write like a pro! at least to me! this seriously is very entertaining cauz im not to sure how certain things will happen so it keeps me all happy! update soon! and thanks for metnioning me i feel special! |