Reviews for The Glass Kiss
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Cute comparison - very endearing.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I liked this idea and the poem overall but found it slightly confusing. I'm not sure if it's just personal preference but 'as' to begin the first and last verses doesn't seem to make sense. I found the same thing in the line 'in ways you nibble my lip'. Maybe 'in the way'? I'm not sure!Anyway what I liked most about this was how curt it is. It has a glassy dreamy kind of quality to it and I just kind of like the idea in general :)
the-foresight chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I don't know if that's meant to be funny, but I sure laughed. Loved the "Nirvana you fiend" line. Short and still funny, a thing that is hard to achieve.
Starleaf chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
I like it! You're really talented... good job :)
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Kind of "out there" if you know what I mean. Your narrative style is a little fractured, but that really adds to the whimsical, romantic feel of this piece.