Reviews for Is there more to this world
Julian chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Kinda liked this one... i thought it was cool.
Elraralia chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
That was pretty interesting though I have to admit I was a little bit bothered by the fact that it should be "than" instead of "then".
Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
I liked it, but I think after a while, you could have gotten rid of, "is there something more in this world than just..." and had the same effect.
firesword chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
deep my friend deep, not a great poem, but, heck what do i know.

Like it a lot all i will say.
q is for quirks chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
"If we were logical, the future would be bleak indeed. But we are more than logical. We are human beings, and we have faith, and we have hope, and we can work."- Jacques Cousteau

you forgot hope. :)

good poem.
Cheeseraptor5 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
It sounds like a very repetitive song. A lot of your points are well-made. But throughout the entire poem, you said "then" when you should have said "than". Good first stab at a poem, though.
elderTopaz chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
hey friend, it seems depressing but its good and a little long but i get the idea or at least i think... some times i find life to be somewhat two dimensional. good poem though. _
Darket chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
I did, and I really wish there were. THere's not a whole lot in this world. But if people really try we can find so much more, it's pretty rough when you look at it.