Reviews for Falsities
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Personal and believable. Flows nicely, but only because I read it with the appropriate punctuation you intended - perhaps it would be easier to read with the periods or commas since it isn't the type of poem that you want read as an "ee cummings type".
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
this is a very strong blinding poem. its wonderful. great. satisfing in a way.~Liz
amenokodomo chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Wow. This poem is excellent- it flows well, the phrasing is great, and I really understand and relate to what you're saying... awesome job.
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
So, I was sitting there reading this poem, and just going, 'wow, this is just such an excellent poem... this is just such a /GREAT/ poem. trista rocks.' It's... excellent, simply and fully. It reads and flows beautifully, and the ideas expressed are... I love this poem. The ideas... I don't know. Fantabulous? Great. Something. GREAT. I LOVE.

Also, thankee much for your review... I must upload mroe stuff. I will. I shall. Thanks...