aww that was soo cute! im loving your one shots at the moment, they're brill, going to read more now haha

i like this one. funny how i neva read it b4... gud tho. :D. u kno wots weird tho? my big bro's name is caleb james. well his name then middle name. u kno. i found that hilarious n tried 2 imagine sumthin like this happening 2 him, made me laugh.

peace!

aw, fluff is the best ever!

amazing o_o

That was incredibly cute :)

I loved this: “YES!” Sharon’s voice cut through the air. Caleb and I pulled apart almost guiltily. “I KNEW you guys were going to get together sooner or later. This is SO perfect! Bri, you’re so petite and cute and Cal’s all tall and you two are just SO CUTE together! Even your CLOTHES match! Oh God, I have got to go tell everyone…” she skipped away as we stood there. haha, Sharon's so funny :D

I applaud your awesome writing skills. :]

aw this is so cute

you have real way with words that both enhances to story and is appropriate to the story and context that the story in. sorry if that makes no sense, im a little tired.

anyways, great work and i cant wait to read more.

Really sweet story ]

i like it! nice title btw.

wow...

you, somehow, and i'll never figure it out in a million years, make a cliche sound original. nice. better than me.

nice story.. like it.

Awh this is so cute you wrote it really well!

I love this story!

aw, this was really cute! i liked it a lot... but i don't know if i could forgive him so easily for ignoring me in school like that... this is just low. but, still, it's a cute one-shot.