Reviews for Evil Males
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Could not have broke me...broken

I like this.. I think its very relateable and true.. the only thing i didnt like is how it went from first person to third.. that seemed a bit off
MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
yes sometimes guys are the lowest creatures to walk the planet and should be lower than scum since there are guys who do stuff like that all the time. it's like they love u one night and the next day... they don't, and it's stupid and mean. it's like they just take you heart only to break it.

i'll stop rambling now. anyways nice poem, especially for those of us who can relate. keep writing!
The Melodious Nocturne chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Wow, I like the ryming. I can never fit that into my poems. Good job!

(')(').0 (the Melodious Nocturne)
lymli chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
well, it's really heartfelt, to me, in some way the poem is sweet, I guess, like bitter-sweet.
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Indeed males are evil :P. This was a really emotive and thoughtfull poem. well done.
M. Williams chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
I wont sit here and defend my fellow dudes for being complete tools sometimes, and I will instead commend you on a poem that captures a mood very well. :)
meaninglessTears chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
wow... amen sista! men really can be jerks and it's hard to find one that's not. i love how u wrote it tho and how it flowed and rhymed. keep writing! - and i'm returning the review
Summerland-girl chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Omg this poem is so sad but really does prove how evil males can be.
Raven Ella chapter 1 . 12/20/2006

I loved it.
Whitedragon354 chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Hug. Skittles for you! look i'm REVIEWING TO SOMETHING!
Embellished Heart chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
So can totally relate. Just got my heart shattered and i feel the pian. Nice work
Ralphie2 chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
When i first hit your profile. This name caught my eye immediatly, being a male and all.

This poem scared me in a way that shook me. As i read what you had written i began to see myself in those words. It really shocked me. Lines 14 and 15 inparticular. Very nice. I shall now probably have to go read everything else you have.

Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
Good here, I know that you most likely know this, and others have told you, but not all guys are bad. Though usually those guys don't have much luck with "the ladies".
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
yea! thank you, and go girls! (sorry, that's my overly femenist side showing) anyways, great poem, great word choice, and great feeling. it's really good.
Beloved Sin chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Love it! I just love your work!it was strong
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