Reviews for Large Disk
Nemonus chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Wow, that was wierd. The rhythm is very sing-song-y, rather like a joke-song...interesting. I mean, rather good. Some lines are clumsy or possibly more suited to prose, though I very much liked, "Had been destroyed by something/That should really be zooming/Around in the darkest reaches of outer space,/Instead of blasting away this little place/Known as the planet Earth for nothing."

to prose, but I immensely liked "
Keith Anthony Power Campbell chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
I'm not sure if this would make my day or ruin it.

Con - Aliens taking familyPro - FREAKING ALIENS W00T! Die space invaders!

I found this poem to be really visual, and liked that lots.
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Hey! that was a pretty good poem! I don't think I have read any other poem like that so it was very interesting. It was like you were talking but in poem form i guess. Anyways Good Job! I liked the end!

- Dreamforever101

please review back! :)