Reviews for The Screen
S Noelle Long chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
for some reason, i just don't really enjoy this poem. i think maybe it's because it sounds like you're trying to hard.

maybe it's the rhyming. i'm not sure.

it's an interesting concept to write a poem about, though.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
wow, another great peice, i really like the theme of this as well as ow you manged to make it work, again thank you for sharig