|Reviews for Challange Me|
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
This is what I need to be writing, right...?
It's great... it's inspiring, it doesn't feel fake. It's not all faux sunshine and bunnies and supposed happiness, it's a beautiful real poem. I like it. It's optimistic... the first line really reminds me of me; fearful... perhaps that was the feeling, perhaps not... but yes. It's great.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
I like the tone of this aided by the archaic use of language although "daren't" strikes me as a bit awkward - you definitely don't want people focusing on a word too long as awkward or forced so perhaps revise - but the rest is nice. Short and sweet.
| Dante The Animelover chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
A really heartfelt poem, It's really good and don't change thing. Hope to see more like this in the future, keep on typing :)