Reviews for Demons
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Sad. Sometimes one just has to write it out. I think this turned out well.

Your continued repition through all the poems I've read is good. It works and isn't at all awkward! Congrats.

Perhaps my favorite line is "Dying by those he swore to defend". It rocks. I'm not gonna lie to you. It's hot.

Felicia.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
i like the sense of internal conflict in this poem and the choral line works really well.