|Reviews for Selfish|
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
*thinks* ... there's something missing here for me. it feels like stream of consciousness, but it doesn't flow enough to get there. it's like i'm reading you wondering something, & i don't really see a point to writing a poem on it. more like a journal entry. i'm really sorry if i offend; i'm not saying this feeling isn't worth expressing. it just doesn't work as a poem. for me.