|Reviews for Daybreak|
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
that is realy a great poem!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Nice transition of emotions.
| Basara chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
I can see another mourning's ( morning ) coming...
| Basnirka amaterka chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Two smiles in two days - the second at reading this. Thanks for your review of my Temptation. Although I find your suggestion interesting, I still think that it is just a reformulation of the original. Or maybe I am wrong...The second maturity concerns the writer but this I think you got right...With respect, M
| MallowsWins chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Too simple and innocent to have any room for error. Good haiku, a small pleasure to read.
| The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
| Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
very true. i like it.~Liz