Reviews for Daybreak
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
that is realy a great poem!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Nice transition of emotions.
Basara chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
I can see another mourning's ( morning ) coming...

nice...
Basnirka amaterka chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Two smiles in two days - the second at reading this. Thanks for your review of my Temptation. Although I find your suggestion interesting, I still think that it is just a reformulation of the original. Or maybe I am wrong...The second maturity concerns the writer but this I think you got right...With respect, M
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Too simple and innocent to have any room for error. Good haiku, a small pleasure to read.

Daze
The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Very good.
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
very true. i like it.~Liz