Reviews for Hendrette's Reluctant Bachelorette
wasabi-angel chapter 11 . 9/25/2011
Please update! I don't generally read stories that haven't been updated in ages, but your story is really original! Pretty pretty please update! :)
3NoOrdinaryUnicorn3 chapter 11 . 3/19/2011
Ah, so many nice boys, who's she gonna choose?

Have you stopped writing this story? You last updated, like 3 years ago!

Please update!
fariswheel chapter 11 . 12/28/2010
Nice story. Love Ben and Julian, don't like Andrew, Brian, and Rick.
Gracelin chapter 11 . 9/23/2010
Oh no, please update soon! This story is definitely more of the originals I've read. I once had an idea to do the opposite of this story, where the girl is competing (for money) in a dating game show. I hope she picks Justin! But definitely not Andrew, I don't care even if he was sincere. I hope there's more fluff and sap later, haha, because I'm a sucker for that. Do update soon.
e.rockgirl chapter 11 . 6/14/2010
It's a shame you stopped writing this. It was a cute story with a surprisingly original plotline. I really enjoyed reading this and I think that you should try and get back into it. I want to find out who she get's with!

Oh, and Livvie and Ty? Very cute :)
sdyedanney chapter 11 . 3/31/2010
so sad... the story is not completed... it's promising though... hope u can have time and complete it for your readers! more power!
ponponcake chapter 11 . 12/21/2009
OMG i love this story! Andrew's an ass! I think I'm going to root for Julian, although Ben is pretty lovable as well. ;) Love the plotline, it's super original and doesn't lag at all! Hope you update soon, I am SO favourite-ing this!
SapphireEyes16 chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
plz update soon ur story is 1 of my faves!
JZK chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
so far I like Julian, Jeremy and Ben the best

This story idea is very original - Ive never read anything like it before

as for Andrew - I dont see whats his problem is - he should go crawl into a hole

and what does Alyssas dad work as? and whats up with her mum?

I cant wait for more!
xXSaraphine-DominoXx chapter 11 . 2/4/2009
Update soon! Its a crime to fiction humanity to leave a story like this hanging! This story is SO awesome, please PLEASE finish it.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 11 . 1/11/2009
LOL that was funny :D
Mikariangel chapter 11 . 12/28/2008
love this story! keepw riting
Lolcano chapter 11 . 12/1/2008
Someone's gettin' it on!Srry. This is a great story. Plz upload soon!
PenName SN chapter 11 . 9/2/2008
Hola, hola, hola!


First off, I really like your story so far. I like the idea of having more than one contestant for some random girl's heart. Or, prom date, at least. But, as they say, nothing good can come without the bad, right? So, the only thing that I have to say about it is that you're rushing it. The first chapter was really good, slow, full of suspense, (I almost had a heart attack hyperventilating when Carla took forever to announce the bachelorette) there are conversations. But after that, things start to slow down. You jump scenes, cut out conversations, and that depletes it. I think you could get the reviews, rates and favourites skyrocketing if you fixed that.

Anyways, that's pretty much all I have to say. I do have one question, though: do you use a beta?

~ Smog
MCakaWriterGirl chapter 11 . 8/16/2008
great story. please please tell me who she ends up with please. insert the cutest puppy dog eyes you have ever seen in your whole life. plase update soon can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work. was andrew really lying cuz that sucks i mean he hurt her twice and he really did sound honest that just sucks.
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