|Reviews for My Pen|
| Jack Bellows chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
I felt the tone strongly especially when I read:
"The words don't fit, they can't. I cant. Fit into this reality. I tried again, maybe tried too much."
Goodness, I still don't know where I belong in this twisted blue planet! And as writers, we all have that feeling of being inadequate when we try harder to be acceptable. You really got to the core and expressed it strongly.
| Jadza chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Oh my gosh! I know exactly what thats like. Nice work... you did it tho...write that is. Better than what I can manage now days. keep writing
| nightslight chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
such pain...well written
| gillian-raine chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I can't even write with my muse... lol...
I like this one... I've been meaning to write something too... no time... *sigh* I miss writing..
good job on the poem... for some reason i can't do freeverse... sigh