Reviews for Ripped
rira-chan chapter 4 . 8/11/2006
;; i;m a dork i didnt realize there were 3 more pgs to read! _;; sorry... but again awesome work!

~rira-chan
rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
wow...awesome work..._ cant really think of more to say...

~rira-chan

P.S thank you for your reveiw on my poem. i appreciate it
the-foresight chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I really liked the repetition of it, brought across the constant moving. And goos imagery all of the way through. My only criticsm is that it is too erratic at times with one word lines. I think most of the time, poems written n one go are better because you are on some sort of rush. Good work.