Reviews for Under One Sun
Bob Evans chapter 15 . 4/10/2007
So now they seem to be relaxing. You once said that their mission would be to start a new world government in that boat, but that later we would learn the truth about the world destruction. I guess now we wait to see if this government of theirs works out.

~Bob Evans
Bob Evans chapter 14 . 4/3/2007
Wow! I was so surprised to see that you had finally updated! It's been like, what, four months? Five? Holy crap. So good to see this going again. I almost thought I'd never get to see what happened to our new characters (let alone their plans for making a nation at sea).

Although I should warn, if all of them drink too much, wild things might start happening, and they'll quickly learn the meaning of "repopulating the Earth".

Keep writing, and update soon!

~Bob Evans
Skyhart chapter 13 . 12/11/2006
Great story, please keep writing.
C. Catlin chapter 13 . 11/28/2006
Great chappie!

The only thing that I thought didn't fit was the way the Americans talked. I don't know anybody who says "Endangered." They seem a little bit...too fancy, if you catch my drift.

Thats about it, except for the capital T at the end. But that didn't really subtract from the story. Keep up the good work .
Bob Evans chapter 13 . 11/22/2006
Ah, the new characters are finally in the mix. So where are they going now? Sydney? Los Angeles? Toyko? I guess I'll just have to wait and see...

~Bob Evans
C. Catlin chapter 12 . 11/10/2006
Wow. I'm impressed! It's captivating and exciting. Keeping me on the edge of my seat. I noted a few Grammer and Spelling errors, but nothing big. I really cannot wait to read more. Get an update soon!
John chapter 12 . 11/7/2006
This is simply amazing. Very well laid out, and addicting. I am very, very eager to read more. One of the greatest books I have ever read, in terms of excitment.
Bob Evans chapter 12 . 11/3/2006
Wow, I haven't seen this story for awhile. It's good to pick up again. Well, we'll have to see if Martin can land on a moving ship.

~Bob Evans
catmadevil chapter 10 . 8/31/2006
This is a cool story. I want an update soon please!
Bob Evans chapter 10 . 8/31/2006
Oh...i see, so this is here at Fiction Press for promotional reasons? Makes sense. Either way, this was still a great chapter, and i look forward to more...yes, more...

~Bob Evans
Bob Evans chapter 9 . 8/25/2006
I'm sorry I'm the only one currently interested in your story, but on a lighter note I do like the way this is going. I'll try and alert some friends about it...
Bob Evans chapter 8 . 8/21/2006
O, the plot thickens. How many more crazy survivors are out there? Good work. Can't wait till the next chapter...
Bob Evans chapter 7 . 8/14/2006
Hahaha! Classic. Now let's see what happens next... Anyways, like I said before, I never thought it ruined your story, I just thought it was interesting. Thanks for the e-mail, and keep updating this story...
Bob Evans chapter 5 . 8/12/2006
This is actually a good read. Five chapters in one day? I was wondering why no one else had reviewed it yet! Anyways, keep writing!

P.S. I noticed one odd thing in your story (it's extremely small, but still interesting). You started by giving someone's weight in the metric system, and then everyone's height in U.S. system. Nothing to be worried about, just thought it was interesting...