Reviews for Hey There, Mary
the-foresight chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
I liked it, good rhyming and a cool theme. I especially liked the last line. Thanks for the review, in answer, no I have never been truly low. Like I say, I walk through it anyway.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
amazing imagery, amazing way of writing ... i really love your style...
a lonely september chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
i really like the mary theme to this. makes me wanna write something along mary's lines as well.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
song like flow to this one, could almost hear the music to go wtih it and with a very touchy subject as well, created an interesting effect, really liked the cigarette and the play on words in the line, But love, that unlovely species, thought that was interesting, anywayz, nicely done