ohmy!

pretty cute!

Go Michael go! XD Open your wings and fly the breeze of loove! *sunset background with birds flying wildly*

I lked thi story pretty much, though, not much to comment.

Clio does really seem like a sinner, but because of her good heart, she went to heave, though, at the beginning, if I didn't know better, I'd say she kind of brough her way up there o.o; with her phi(fi)lantropy and all.

and it was also strange the way Michael felt to atracted to Clio, when surely he'd seen uncountable other women. o.~

What she has that atracts him? A good heart?, "pure" soul?, his soul mate perhaps? It leaves us thinking what that reason could possible be. what set Clio apart from the others to have an angel give her his heart...

BUT! there's a good thing about that, Clio becomes more earthly, even if Mary Sue-ish(completly forgiven for that), but easier to indetify with the female readers x) Cause I can name a few party girls who love to spend money and dream of the perfect guy and romance. :)

bye!

Oh my god!

I love this story!

this story is so fantastic! i loved it! you are an awesome author! okay, wayy too many exclamation marks. seriously though, it was an awesome story.

damn...what an intense chapter. I like your story very much, every chapter is better and better )

aww...this is such a beautiful story. I think here aren't many stories about angels and this one is really good and thich chapter was just delicate. Can't wait to read the rest. Good job )

This is such an awesome story, since I love archangels and other spiritual stuff like that to do with God too. I love Michael since it was interesting to read how he changes from an emotionless stone, to a warm man of emotion!

Somehow though, I don't know why, but I sort of had a gut feeling about Jacob being involved in Clio's murder.

Anyway, I'm so glad I read this. I'm so happy to see that the story doesn't end in tragedy and that it has a happy ending. This story cheered me up a lot. Good job!

How beautiful! I loved how this played out. With this type of story line, you could have easily ran into the problem of preaching a religion, instead of telling a story about a part of it, and you avoided that one quite easily. I'm agnostic, but I have always loved Michael. He's my favorite archangel, and this story was wonderfully written. Well done and it's going onto my favorites.

This story was so great! It is one of the best angel related stories I have ever read. I especialy loved your version of God. He was atully happy and was not all "I am God hear me roar and force you into submission" It was refreshing to see a good angel story!

Wow! Just wow! There's an electrical storm here, so I can't really write a long review, but what a wondrful ending! What a wonderful story all together. I can't say enough how much your imagination amazes me. Well done.

I love the way you write, you so know I do, but I thought I'd hammer home. ) You rule, so much!

Aww its over! but it ended so perfectly, and with room for a sequel (hint hint).

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I greatly admire the way you dealt with such a potentially controversial subject like religion so gracefully...

Thanks for a great read!

Well, that was certainly enjoyable! I started with the first chapter and just kept going until I got to the end, it was so good.

Just wondering: Are you going to write something with Nathaniel? Because personally, I think it would be awesome if he got together with Gabriel.

Great job either way!

That was a very beautiful story.

At times, it had me crying my eyes out.

Very well done!

Aw, they have an eternity! Yay! Loved it!

This was an awsme story. You really have tallent, there was never a time when i got bored. keep the good work up, by the way what happened to your other story "Shayla" it thought it was relly good too. lol