Reviews for Steel Moiré
The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Lovely. Your words are always deep, thoughtful, and beautiful. I admire your talent.
Basnirka amaterka chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
You're so good at writing...You should have been a writer. That's all I can say here and now.
FallBreeze chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
"I struggle to stay in touch and I struggle to stay out of reach"-that is me in this very moment. Either way leads me back to the same emotional mess of a place. I liked reading this kind of stream of consciousness. sometimes (as with something I just wrote) it doesn't always work to try to break how you feel up with stanzas.

"If these were my last words it would not be"-I enjoyed that part as well. Last words are too final. I keep having last words over and over, and it's never the end. It's almost easier to let things disintegrate into nothing...which one is more painful, I don't know.