Reviews for Meating Place
Wrath of Cthulu chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
You're the only man in the planet who doesn't think he is meat to be eaten. I would kill my parents to have a chick treat my penis with something like respect. Or even distracted toying. I'm fine with that.
Canterbury Jane chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
The line referring to the hand being a utensil covered in meat made me look at my hands for quite some time, thinking about all the connotations that go along with that image. You have a way of making your readers think about your poetry for days and days after reading.
fiddlesticks chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
You are a nostril hair. This is so effing hilarious that I couldn't stop reading it. What is wrong with you, man? lol.
stuck here waiting chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
This is an amazing "Kiss my Ass" piece of poetry. Very nice, good flow, nice rhyme scheme, yada, yada. Love the last lines to death, beginning at My hand's a utensil...