Oh my god that was beautiful. The first story ive read on FictionPress and im in love with it.

I love the way youve described Rayn and what he went through.

that was very good, I really enjoyed that for a MM

this is really cute and i really wish that there was a sequel to it. . its so cute!

Oh My Friggin' God! I Am IMMEDIATELY putting this on my Favorite Stories list! I love it so much that I am about to cry and can barely type! I love love love love love love love love love love this! so much! I am the happiest dictator that ever lived and probably the saddest as well. bi!

I once read this story a long time ago and it made it on to my favorites list. I read it again today and found more meaning in it. I've been Rayn recently. You captured all the emotion and feeling such a breakup can make you feel. It's nice when others write down and say for you exactly what you want to say -even when they don't know they're doing it. Thank you.

Aww! Damn, that story was so good, I even went to the trouble of downloading that damn evanescence song. I loved those first few lyrics soo much! That last part broke my heart. I havent felt my heart beat like that since.. I dunno.. My heart hasnt really been feeling all "achey" lately.

It ached in such a good way.

You can tell that you write poetry, this story is so lyrical and beautiful. You conveyed Arayn's emotions really well, the sad tone of the story really came through.

“I met someone else.”

When that line comes out. Wow, the emotion that comes with it. It's devastating. Very nicely written. I hope you keep writing stories. :)

Oh and thanks for reviewing my one-shot. :)

aw. man, that sucks arse hard. i feel bad for him & he wasn't even the one who started the little relationship thing. gawd, that must've sucked. but the other dude did have a point. they were so young, how could they know that they're in love? meh, he'll probably get over it or something. but right now, at that moment where he is, it must be very painful. it was beautifully written, though i did catch a few grammatical errors.

*Eh, wait. You want me, to hang out with you?” he sounded sceptical, and for good reason.*

you spelt "skeptical" wrong. hah, but that didn't really matter. . .um, yeah. (: & in other parts you didn't add the proper punctuation marks, but that can be overlooked. so anyway, that was great & keep up the great work, yeah?

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