Reviews for Untitled2
Demyx chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Dark, meaningful. I usually don't like so many one-word lines but here it fits. Nice.

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4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Hey it is I again another very nice poem. It is a little bit random but for me I see a point. Pleasantly dark. Another one I like. Another one that deserves a pat on the back for you. Keep going!
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
This normally isn't my type of poetry but I liked this. Nice work!