Reviews for Beefin'
trash can art chapter 1 . 8/18/2006


I love you for the the classical music stanza. Oh boy... It truly made my day.

You know, what got me the most was the format of this poem. I wrote a poem in the very same format, but this is the first I've seen it done by someone. Not that I believe I'm special or anything. This is just the first time.

djsaxon2 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
This really needs formatting, it's very hard to read. It should read more like this:

"I woke up the morning and turned on TV, look at the news and what do I see?I see artists fighting with other artists, but now all the beef is simply retarded"

However, i managed to figure it out and it's a cute little piece! Great job.

Saxon. (reviews are appreciated)
Crazy Sadie chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
That was hilarious! You should've added a line about classical musicians (i.e. Mozart vs. Beethoven)That would be funny. ;)