|Reviews for The Voluntary Recluse|
| Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Nice chapter beginning. I have several questions that I'm patient enough to wait and see if some are answered in the next chapter. Which I hope you update soon.
| Angie chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Wow. It's a wonderful beginning, very descriptive and emotional. Reading this, it's very easy to feel the emotions running through the man and get an idea of this boy's reclusive behavior... I can't even think of a small bit of constructive criticism (a first for me!).
Excellent beginning. I shall check back to see where it goes, hopefully.
| The Blurb chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
A very well written story. I look forward to the next chapter.